tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post4411750093090977735..comments2023-04-05T05:06:32.743-07:00Comments on Stories by Susan: Flash Fiction Friday - Merlin and ArthurSusan Blakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08735073767526564259noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-3717211168277050722011-09-12T20:58:26.941-07:002011-09-12T20:58:26.941-07:00My comment is so delayed. I often print out storie...My comment is so delayed. I often print out stories that are written in blogs and take them with me on my morning commute. I write in little comments when I read with the intention of transferring them to the screen. <br /><br />My lateness might give a false impression of indifference to this story but, on the contrary, I really really loved it. I shared it. I agree that it should be expanded on but I love the little window to a potentially illustrious mythical epic you created out of the prompt given. So wonderfully written and fun to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-9415595082563715662011-07-26T00:50:08.886-07:002011-07-26T00:50:08.886-07:00Great story, Susan, I think it's your best yet...Great story, Susan, I think it's your best yet. Keep going with it!katsmountforthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02412756750755718505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-51977668139223839532011-07-25T11:44:10.375-07:002011-07-25T11:44:10.375-07:00I want to know who had the sword? (I suspected the...I want to know who had the sword? (I suspected the address would turn out to be the White House!!!)<br /><br />Susan - I think you really have to pursue this story - we're all chewing our fingernails down to the quick! ;-)SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-89063841134601366072011-07-24T22:04:01.565-07:002011-07-24T22:04:01.565-07:00Great prologue! Now... get busy with the story!
...Great prologue! Now... get busy with the story!<br /><br />:=)<br /><br />I love how you counterpoint Arthur's ineptness with Merlin's wisdom. And, a very interesting take on the grail.... I really liked that... there's a story in there, isn't there?<br /><br />Very nice story, Susan... very nice!! A most enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-52002658541016857252011-07-22T11:47:46.198-07:002011-07-22T11:47:46.198-07:00Yay, they have the sword at last! But what will th...Yay, they have the sword at last! But what will they do with all the free time??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-21022974351936139882011-07-21T16:39:52.253-07:002011-07-21T16:39:52.253-07:00I'm with Thomas. This is where the story begin...I'm with Thomas. This is where the story begins. Good writing, I enjoyed it very much.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00533184345345882921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8934733230888570001.post-41878248001857075962011-07-21T12:43:56.794-07:002011-07-21T12:43:56.794-07:00I loved this. I hope you take an extra thousand wo...I loved this. I hope you take an extra thousand words, or whatever it takes, and keep writing it.Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.com